秋風や何為さば時みたされむ 相馬遷子
akikaze ya nani nasaba toki mitasarem
autumn wind—
what I should do
to fill the time
Senshi Soma
from “Gendai no Haiku” (Modern Haiku), edited by Shobin Hirai, Kodansha, Tokyo, 1996
Fay’s Note: Senshi Soma (1908-1976)
秋風や何為さば時みたされむ 相馬遷子
akikaze ya nani nasaba toki mitasarem
autumn wind—
what I should do
to fill the time
Senshi Soma
from “Gendai no Haiku” (Modern Haiku), edited by Shobin Hirai, Kodansha, Tokyo, 1996
Fay’s Note: Senshi Soma (1908-1976)
This haiku sounds like someone who has lost everything, since at this time of year there seems to be a great rushing to prepare for winter. So much to do, and the days get shorter and the time seems never enough. When you lose everything, it scarcely matters that winter comes…
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